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When I was 10: SOL 25

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When I was 10 years old, I met Holly and Julie Sharp. They were fraternal twins so they didn’t really look alike. Oh yes they looked like sisters but they were very different. This was perfect as far as I was concerned since I had a twin brother who was also fraternal. From the moment I met Holly and Julie, I wanted to introduce them to Matthew, my twin brother. 

"Don't like him more than me, okay?" I told the other twins on the way to my house. "Because sometimes he can be funnier and he'll do what you want him to do, but my mom says we come as a pair, okay?" Holly and Julie nodded.

So it came as a great relief that they seemed to like us both just the same. 

We began spending all of our daylight time together that summer. I would call Holly or Julie (whomever answered the phone) in the morning and we'd plan out our day. Sometimes we would meet at the college pool to swim and dare each other to jump off the high dive...and what  a high dive it was. I would climb all the way to the top of its ladder and scooch out slowly to the end of the diving board. Then I would stand there and wait. Matthew and Holly would egg me on. “C’mon!” they’d shout. This wouldn’t help matters. Julie would stand at the end of the diving board next to the ladder saying, "It's okay if you come back." But I didn’t want to. "No!" I shouted. "I want to be the one who makes the jump and lives to tell about it!" They'd all laugh. Even the lifeguard would laugh. Then I'd jump holding my nose and squinching up my face and landing smack down hard on the flat of my thigh and it would burn, but I would live just like I said I would.

That was the summer we were 10, all four of us. Matthew and me and Holly and Julie Sharp.


  1. I took my almost-ten year old and almost-12 year old to the pool today, and the first thing they both said afterwards was, "Did you see me go off the high dive?"

    You capture that summer feeling perfectly, as well as the specific feeling of twins amongst twins.

  2. I love that twin connection, and your worry about them liking him better than you (as if). How is it that the summers of that age span -- from 10 to 12 or so -- remain indelible in so many of our memories? It's as if that is the time we first realized we were alive to the world.

  3. My good friend has boys who are fraternal twins. Their connection is so tight. I find it fascinating.

  4. Twins fascinate me. I was right there with you watching you jump and live. Hah! Your voice is clear. I'd love to meet your twin brother. I bet the two of you together are hilarious.

  5. How fortuitous--another twin set to share the summer! You captured the trepidation of making new friends, and the fun of summer play, so well in this piece.

  6. I can't imagine my twins connected to another set of twins! It would be fun though. I love just the feel of the last 2 lines.

  7. The experience of being a twin is unique. How wonderful to share with another set! All voices are present here through your voice. Some a little stronger than others. Beautiful craft.

  8. So fun to have found another set of twins to enjoy fun times and memories with!! :)

  9. I love this sentence: "Don't like him more than me, okay?" I told the other twins on the way to my house. It is so real and vulnerable. I completely knew you in that moment from one sentence. Thank you for sharing.

  10. So real. You captured the thoughts of a 10-year-old (or maybe everyone) with "don't like him more than me, okay?" Love it!

  11. Great memories of your 10 year old self! Love the image of you all at the pool

  12. Great line! "I was forever misunderstanding things until I read them."


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